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Take another look around
This abandoned house you found inside of you
Walls and foundations rot away
This storm will bring you down

This is the last chance to find out
To find that it's not too late to go back
To the last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself

Lift this weight upon your mind
Soon this searing pain
Will leave your body blind
Your time is running out
This pressure will become
Too much to bear

The last chance to find out
To find that it's not too late to go back
To the last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself!

Falling back with
Nothing left below you,
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

Last chance to find out
It's not too late to go back,
The last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself...
Track 3 from my band's album Altered State
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yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this is wonderful

much wisdom in the writing

is any of this from personal experience ?
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Boogirl2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really connected to this! wow its beautiful!! =p :heart:
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
I really like the structure and flow of this. I also looked around your gallery. You have taken some amazing photos. With words and pictures, you are quite talented. 
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FreeSpiritEtrnalSoul Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful <3
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jojo22 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Falling back with
Nothing below you,
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

^very cool
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RescueThisInsane Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013

Beautiful, love this. :)
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Shachar-Art Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:rose:
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CanveySue Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely words
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SapphireTurquoise Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...
I liked this part very much!
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sketchydreamer Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
This is my favorite lyric in this song:

Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

Wonderful imagery!
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