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Take another look around
This abandoned house you found inside of you
Walls and foundations rot away
This storm will bring you down

This is the last chance to find out
To find that it's not too late to go back
To the last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself

Lift this weight upon your mind
Soon this searing pain
Will leave your body blind
Your time is running out
This pressure will become
Too much to bear

The last chance to find out
To find that it's not too late to go back
To the last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself!

Falling back with
Nothing left below you,
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

Last chance to find out
It's not too late to go back,
The last remains of who you were
The last chance to save yourself...
Track 3 from my band's album Altered State
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yellowsmoke321 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow, this is wonderful

much wisdom in the writing

is any of this from personal experience ?
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Boogirl2 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really connected to this! wow its beautiful!! =p :heart:
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cerealnovels Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
I really like the structure and flow of this. I also looked around your gallery. You have taken some amazing photos. With words and pictures, you are quite talented. 
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FreeSpiritEtrnalSoul Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful <3
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jojo22 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Falling back with
Nothing below you,
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

^very cool
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RescueThisInsane Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013

Beautiful, love this. :)
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Shachar-Art Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
:rose:
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CanveySue Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Lovely words
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SapphireTurquoise Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...
I liked this part very much!
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sketchydreamer Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2012
This is my favorite lyric in this song:

Nothing but the glow
Of the moon to slow you...

Wonderful imagery!
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ennamoj Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
whoa. listening (and reading the lyrics) to this made me wanna get up and grab "that" chance.. :D
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ShadowsFall196 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my, I believe you have a new fan...

The piano at the beginning of this is, well, beautiful. Figured I'd point that out. Your voice is lovely.

/Goes to check out your other stuff~
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ToHellWithYourCrap Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Professional Writer
This music reminds me of Within Temptation, but of course with a male lead, and less melodramatic.
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KyoDracon Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist
ohhh, i wanna see some of your vids and youtube always tells me, that it's not
available in my country! that suckss! :fork:
but again, i love this song!
guess it's my favourit one of the three tracks i coul already listen to!:+favlove:

<3<3<3
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SilentReveries Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
I sooooo loved this song!!!! it's simply amazing!!
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AlienLazer Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2011
Thank you for the fave.
Love your lyrics. <3
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JFDP Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2011   Photographer
Love the lyrics. Will have to check this out on the Ytube :D
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brennalephotographe Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2011   Photographer
Lovely! <3
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artistgirl12 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011
I really like it its very touching Keep up the great work(:
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listening to this on youtube. i love it! the guitars are beast. you have a good voice!(:
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tubbums32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Artist
thanks so much!
:D :D :D
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you're very welcome!! :D
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tubbums32 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2010  Student Artist
:) :) :)
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