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Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32 Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32
I'm so excited that this is finally online!

Story behind the video:
This video outlines the story of a man who awakens standing in his home, holding a pistol. He finds the body of a dead woman, and realizing that it is his wife, vows to kill whoever murdered her. Throughout the course of the video, he discovers that he himself was the murderer, his alternate personality forcibly recalling the memories of the scene, which he had repressed. The final scene of the video represents the ultimate realization of his actions as his collective conscience forces him down the hall to accept what he's done.
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I listened to the song and it is very good.

The intro kinda made me think, hmm another typical metallica style clone, but as I listened to more, it developed into a more progressive style and the composition of the song has been done really well.

i can't help thinking though that the intro could use some of those epic keyboard string sounds to give it a full frontal boost.

The guitarist is very good but I felt he could have really let rip with a roaring solo in there somewhere, instead it kinda plods along albeit very well played nonetheless.

i don't understand the youtuber who made bad comment about the vocalist, he's pretty good actually, his heart is definitely in it could perhaps just bring it from the diaphragm a bit more.

A very clean voice though, distinctly different and refreshing.

I can't fault the rhythm section, bass and drums go very well and it's a very tight output.

I hope you do really well. very promising stuff!
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109 out of 110 deviants thought this was fair.

Very original.
Drums: Quite good. The mark of a skilled drummer is the ability to play rythm, harmony, and transitions all at once, or seperately. Kudos for the 32nd notes, by the way.

Lead Singer: You have and extremely photogenic and expressive face, which is a very nice quality for a singer. Great job on the lyrics.
I really enjoyed the opera-like quality of your voice, and the vocal harmonies tie the song together nicely

Bass: Wow. Solid like a rock. You kept the song moving, and really gave the music a beating heart.

Guitar: Particularly nice job writing those solos. Everything was well coordinated, and your playing gave an extremely pleasant tone to the song overall, while retaining that 'bleeding heart' tone.

Filming: A song can easily be undone by the bad filming of a music video. But the masterful touch applied to this filming really carried the story along, a visual feast.

Overall: Very good! One thing to watch out for: From now on, everyone will hold up your new songs to this song, as well as Last Chance. Make sure not to dissappoint them, or you will lose your fanbase. Fortunately, I sincerely doubt that will ever happen.

You are all extremely talented, and I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. Many thanks!
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39 out of 40 deviants thought this was fair.

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ellianezhang Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
love it! Really like this song. Could you allow me to download it and save it to my Mac with a video downloader for mac?
JaimeBennett1980 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
wow :) really good, I love it. I went to  college and took recording technologies as well as played guitar. I was a radio dj and music is my lifes passion, you guys are really good :)
arnaldo17 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great Song ! Good Continuation !
MaximusBSR Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Huya ti ebashish
dimfoto Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Krutoe ebashilovo!
xclt Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
tubbums,What a killer badass song.......You and your group
are top notch in production and sound , just everything....
I so enjoyed myself I played it like 3 times to allow it to blow
my mind.   So Cool ____________________________________________-duck
deviant-es335 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Photographer
very nice! really liked the guitar!
Chris21465 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the song and the video is great as well. Very good singing that really gets under my skin!
F3ras Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
love it
Doctorwho227 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Really liked the song
waynegirl13 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Student General Artist
dimfoto Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
IseultdeValle Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
Its excellent!
JohnnyCurcio Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dude I was diggin' the song, man! I am (as I type) working my 9-5 but as soon as I get more time I'm gonna listen harder :p Congratulations!
lulu-bel Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fave!!
maximilianobianco Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Photographer
Cool sounds. I didn't watch the video in all honesty but I heard it just fine. If you ever make it to Tampa, Florida let me know so I can check out the show.
Wolkentanzerin Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
uhh I like this song la in love 
olearysfunphotos Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great song, awesome job on the video!
SpiritHallowFlame Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Great song! Great singing! Keep up with the good work
katymousso Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
amazing voice! :clap:
kevmg17 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh, hi there cool song! *+fav* :D
JanPrime Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014   General Artist
I really really love it :)
SeelentraumA Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Photographer
Why so tense? Would be better if you don't look so agonized ;)
PeaTree-Creations Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
I listened to your song and watched your video. I was very impressed with both. Great job! You and your band will do well. Don't give up.
daoodpirnazar Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
Which instrument do you play on the video ?
WillDsg Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
nonyeB Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks, mate !!! :)
crisartz Featured By Owner May 13, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Dude i am so jelly of the drums!!!! Mine are so beat up :( i have used them so much that even the seat screw falls off...well i do guess that this is a professional music video... Kinda liked the music, i listen to a lot of music, and my living room demonstrates it hahaha
shaun-kilfoy Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Professional Photographer
Rocks dude
pockylove01 Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank you for the fav means a lot to me. Hug :happybounce: Oh My Gawd
codina Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
sounds good ;o)
PaoloMascatelli Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Professional General Artist
Great work.. I'm a music junky, best.
glipsztyk Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
dark story, nice record :)
DeviousPSYCHOviciouS Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dude just watched the music video, you guys got skills. Really cool music video :)
basaloochoa Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! I do not speak English. But I really liked this video. It tells a tragic story right?. It's a good work. Thank you very much, tubbums32. Greetings.Clap 
akawidow Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good music vocals also good
Raevannon Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I've been meaning to check this out for a while, but never had time and always forgot. I really love it! Reminds me of Anberlin :]

And I disagree with most of the YouTube comments; I think it's perfect without screaming. Totally downloading your free stuff, and paying for what I can when I get a job :D
Molebut Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
Tubbs, I finally checked out your music on you tube. Great music! Sound sort of like Rush, but better. Great voice Tubbs.
bellelarme Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Writer
The song is cool and i like your voice. and thanks for the faves of my photographs, by the way ^^
KaterinaSonne Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
I like the video, the atmotphere, the music - everything, thats just great !!:)
MrWootton Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Professional Writer
Note me if you are ever playing in Houston!
OtakuTacooo Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
You're so talented it's amazing ! My new favorite song ^^
Clamdiggy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very talented.  Not your usual 3 chord song.  I liked it very much!
Rutiej Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great Youtube and as always thanks for the fave:happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
carnine9 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
what font u use for watermark bro ? sorry for asking.
lightbeginnings Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wait did you make the song and the video??
NickyKirei Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
artilleryart Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Love the DOF! :)
Huskylover4200 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student General Artist
thank you for the favs!
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