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Monologue - Music Videoby =tubbums32

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I'm so excited that this is finally online!
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This video outlines the story of a man who awakens standing in his home, holding a pistol. He finds the body of a dead woman, and realizing that it is his wife, vows to kill whoever murdered her. Throughout the course of the video, he discovers that he himself was the murderer, his alternate personality forcibly recalling the memories of the scene, which he had repressed. The final scene of the video represents the ultimate realization of his actions as his collective conscience forces him down the hall to accept what he's done.

Critique by ~Laernu Apr 19, 2013, 4:43:36 PM

A third deep critique of your video seems fit, for a production that shows a lot of effort and organized thoughts. The complexity of the sounds of all of you gathered together, is really impulsive, it is like an upbeat forcing me to pay attention to the song, and the video. Since the first second it grabs the attention and the colours throughout the whole story are amazingly well balanced, like the shadows and lights.

The intensity of the song, and its different parts, make it enough complex to fight all the way along to the top. The notes and words (and tones of your voice in specific) are completely professional and require no more attention... but a never ending passion to keep it up! We all like it!

The close ups are good, and the movements are descriptive. I can tell a strong idea behind the video, and authentic personalities. So there is enough force power for the whole world. Only then some common ideas among the world need to be attended. Any fair suggestion to the looks might be important. At last, if it's about selling you need to satisfy the client's needs as well. You all know how.

So everything is amazing. And excellent. Along the way the changes will always do well, improving perfection. You are an authentic band with great musicians in it, and a focused idea and style. Strong cords and an unmatched voice makes a great combination! Excellent!

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Critique by ~Breath0fAir Feb 2, 2013, 6:27:44 PM

HEY! Since you requested a Critique I decided I would write you one. I was watching the video and I really liked how you had a really good balance between the vocals, sound, instruments, video and what not. You left just enough out of the video that it made the viewer think and that is what is really important when making a music video. You want to intrigue the viewer which is something you guys managed to do VERY WELL. I really like the little details you have included in the video, like right before she was shot, the lady had smeared mascara which really added to the believability factor of the video thus enhancing the quality. There was a lot of different things going on in the video however, they all seemed to connect and flow together like a story should. The music really went with the video as did the video with the music if you know what I mean. I absolutely love it. The only thing I think could have been done differently is if you had incorporated a different type of video Technique to your video. Like.... maybe make the video part with you guys singing and playing in black and white and the 'video story part' in color. Or try starting with the camera at your feet, or the actors feet and then go up and zoom outwards at the same time, making the viewer guess who they are watching, what the person(s) are doing, and what impact or meaning it has on the song. Just keep in mind, the song has a specific meaning to every person, they connect to different things in the song because different things stand out. Truly successful music videos leave enough for the imagination to keep the viewer guessing but show enough to keep the viewer's attention. Well done!

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~HayleyByronBell 3 days ago New member

I just listen to the song. I must say that I thought it wouldn't be my kind, by finally, I think I like it. The subject is really dark, so the song is kind of weird, but still it still a very good song !

~BennyLava1985 4 days ago Hobbyist Photographer

Cool i love it <3

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*Shazmotaz 4 days ago New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist

awesome video, very well done!

~Camaron-drake 6 days ago Student General Artist

righteous bro!

~MaxPaynet May 15, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Awesome Music Video awesome SOng keep it Up man awesome work

~Dilemasmenteecorpo May 11, 2013

I finally watched the video! It is so good!! I loved it!

~Lottie-Girl May 11, 2013 Student General Artist

This is amazing! Really well put together. Great Video, great lyrics and your voice is beautiful Tubbs, didn't picture you as the metal type haha. I loved the bit when you saw the woman in the mirror and where you were walking behind the man. Powerful narrative.

~Dark-Hopes May 11, 2013 New member Hobbyist Photographer

Great work!

*Sarah-Vafidis May 8, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Loved the song and the video!

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