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Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32 Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32
I'm so excited that this is finally online!

Story behind the video:
This video outlines the story of a man who awakens standing in his home, holding a pistol. He finds the body of a dead woman, and realizing that it is his wife, vows to kill whoever murdered her. Throughout the course of the video, he discovers that he himself was the murderer, his alternate personality forcibly recalling the memories of the scene, which he had repressed. The final scene of the video represents the ultimate realization of his actions as his collective conscience forces him down the hall to accept what he's done.
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I listened to the song and it is very good.

The intro kinda made me think, hmm another typical metallica style clone, but as I listened to more, it developed into a more progressive style and the composition of the song has been done really well.

i can't help thinking though that the intro could use some of those epic keyboard string sounds to give it a full frontal boost.

The guitarist is very good but I felt he could have really let rip with a roaring solo in there somewhere, instead it kinda plods along albeit very well played nonetheless.

i don't understand the youtuber who made bad comment about the vocalist, he's pretty good actually, his heart is definitely in it could perhaps just bring it from the diaphragm a bit more.

A very clean voice though, distinctly different and refreshing.

I can't fault the rhythm section, bass and drums go very well and it's a very tight output.

I hope you do really well. very promising stuff!
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109 out of 110 deviants thought this was fair.

Very original.
Drums: Quite good. The mark of a skilled drummer is the ability to play rythm, harmony, and transitions all at once, or seperately. Kudos for the 32nd notes, by the way.

Lead Singer: You have and extremely photogenic and expressive face, which is a very nice quality for a singer. Great job on the lyrics.
I really enjoyed the opera-like quality of your voice, and the vocal harmonies tie the song together nicely

Bass: Wow. Solid like a rock. You kept the song moving, and really gave the music a beating heart.

Guitar: Particularly nice job writing those solos. Everything was well coordinated, and your playing gave an extremely pleasant tone to the song overall, while retaining that 'bleeding heart' tone.

Filming: A song can easily be undone by the bad filming of a music video. But the masterful touch applied to this filming really carried the story along, a visual feast.

Overall: Very good! One thing to watch out for: From now on, everyone will hold up your new songs to this song, as well as Last Chance. Make sure not to dissappoint them, or you will lose your fanbase. Fortunately, I sincerely doubt that will ever happen.

You are all extremely talented, and I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. Many thanks!
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JaimeBennett1980 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Professional General Artist
wow :) really good, I love it. I went to  college and took recording technologies as well as played guitar. I was a radio dj and music is my lifes passion, you guys are really good :)
arnaldo17 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Great Song ! Good Continuation !
MaximusBSR Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Huya ti ebashish
dimfoto Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Krutoe ebashilovo!
xclt Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014
tubbums,What a killer badass song.......You and your group
are top notch in production and sound , just everything....
I so enjoyed myself I played it like 3 times to allow it to blow
my mind.   So Cool ____________________________________________-duck
deviant-es335 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Student Photographer
very nice! really liked the guitar!
Chris21465 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the song and the video is great as well. Very good singing that really gets under my skin!
F3ras Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
love it
Doctorwho227 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
Really liked the song
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