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Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32 Monologue - Music Video by tubbums32
I'm so excited that this is finally online!

Story behind the video:
This video outlines the story of a man who awakens standing in his home, holding a pistol. He finds the body of a dead woman, and realizing that it is his wife, vows to kill whoever murdered her. Throughout the course of the video, he discovers that he himself was the murderer, his alternate personality forcibly recalling the memories of the scene, which he had repressed. The final scene of the video represents the ultimate realization of his actions as his collective conscience forces him down the hall to accept what he's done.
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I listened to the song and it is very good.

The intro kinda made me think, hmm another typical metallica style clone, but as I listened to more, it developed into a more progressive style and the composition of the song has been done really well.

i can't help thinking though that the intro could use some of those epic keyboard string sounds to give it a full frontal boost.

The guitarist is very good but I felt he could have really let rip with a roaring solo in there somewhere, instead it kinda plods along albeit very well played nonetheless.

i don't understand the youtuber who made bad comment about the vocalist, he's pretty good actually, his heart is definitely in it could perhaps just bring it from the diaphragm a bit more.

A very clean voice though, distinctly different and refreshing.

I can't fault the rhythm section, bass and drums go very well and it's a very tight output.

I hope you do really well. very promising stuff!
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96 out of 97 deviants thought this was fair.

Very original.
Drums: Quite good. The mark of a skilled drummer is the ability to play rythm, harmony, and transitions all at once, or seperately. Kudos for the 32nd notes, by the way.

Lead Singer: You have and extremely photogenic and expressive face, which is a very nice quality for a singer. Great job on the lyrics.
I really enjoyed the opera-like quality of your voice, and the vocal harmonies tie the song together nicely

Bass: Wow. Solid like a rock. You kept the song moving, and really gave the music a beating heart.

Guitar: Particularly nice job writing those solos. Everything was well coordinated, and your playing gave an extremely pleasant tone to the song overall, while retaining that 'bleeding heart' tone.

Filming: A song can easily be undone by the bad filming of a music video. But the masterful touch applied to this filming really carried the story along, a visual feast.

Overall: Very good! One thing to watch out for: From now on, everyone will hold up your new songs to this song, as well as Last Chance. Make sure not to dissappoint them, or you will lose your fanbase. Fortunately, I sincerely doubt that will ever happen.

You are all extremely talented, and I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. Many thanks!
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lightbeginnings 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
wait did you make the song and the video??
NickyKirei Apr 4, 2014  Student General Artist
artilleryart Mar 28, 2014  New member Hobbyist Artist
Love the DOF! :)
Huskylover4200 Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thank you for the favs!
good music congrats
now You can dedicate this to Oscar Pictorius...
Livelyourlife Mar 12, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for favoriting muff
shawhanmoleski Mar 11, 2014  New member Hobbyist Photographer
Hey I just checked out your video on youtube, very nice man!
Very glossy and sleek and I turned the volume all the way up so thanks for that.
Lakesideartist1984 Mar 10, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Tubbums32 why don't you join the posse and give me a watch. I appreciate all the faves and always recognize you when you fav my stuff. I think I'll be making a group soon and we have a very strong team, wantcha to be apart of it. LAKESIDEARTIST
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