I think this would look great even without the laserish thingie. The pose and the expression give out a lot of the intensity you want to transmit while singing. Love the lights in it. The laser thing adds something even though I'm still wondering how it has been done. I'm kinda bummed that it does not define exactly your shape and gets broken here and there, but a really nice idea. The girl actually helps understanding there is something going on, and not just photoshopped, so it's okay in my opinion, even if maybe the pose is a bit off the picture, she could be actively part of it, somehow. Cool pic!
a well-composed, well-executed work, i have yet to see anything in this manner. it actually looks like you are surrounded by a florescent, godly light, and the visibility is great. one major distraction i see is the girl weilding the laser of ultra awesomeness. and you are wearing a very nice ste of clothing on. it's a great piece of art, it COULD use some adjustment. i see the laser breakin some and the hands are a bit off, but otherwise, an amazing pic, i'll just have to feature it on my page. oh, this is my first critique actually
The laser thing adds something even though I'm still wondering how it has been done.
I'm kinda bummed that it does not define exactly your shape and gets broken here and there, but a really nice idea. The girl actually helps understanding there is something going on, and not just photoshopped, so it's okay in my opinion, even if maybe the pose is a bit off the picture, she could be actively part of it, somehow.
Cool pic!
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