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A summer's eve
Lying in the cool grass 
Of days gone by
And I could get lost 
In your blue skies of spider silk
I wake in the half-sweet exhaust
Of some smoker's trail,
The last vestiges of one
Who was so tangibly here...
Sitting with you 
under an eternally starry sky
These memories bathed
In perpetual light...
I'm seeing your eyes in everyone else,
And these long-lost memories begin...
It's not them I want; it's you that I crave,
And your waves come crashing again.
Your imprints are everywhere
In everything I see,
Dreaming of a time
When again we would be
Staring glassy-eyed
Into the familiar abyss,
And the moments that never happened
Are the ones that I miss.
Some of my proudest lyrics from the new album.
Listen to it in context here --> [link]
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Mary-Jose Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Its GOOD !Nod 
Steph-Spinnerets Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I totally love anything spider related but Sir you have taken me back to age 16 and my first love 

Montalto69 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Professional General Artist
This is a good read especially the last two lines.
LezlieLove Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
EclecticAnt Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
hunter-ravenwolf Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Professional Writer
the imagery is crisp and pure. I quite like it.
jojo22 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Love this one, relateable. 
PolarStars Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
These lyrics, though I'm not entirely sure what they're about, remind me of me big brother, he died 3 years ago and every time I hear this song it makes me feel a little be closer to him. Thank you for bringing such beautiful words into the world, they're words I think I'll cherish forever. <3 You truly are amazing!
solost72 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
This describes my soul perfectly at this moment in my life. Thank you for such great work.
destandnikkii Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I get lost in your lyrics. They are very good. Especially this one.
ThornsofPurpleRoses Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my goodness, this is simply wonderful! I so wish that I could write like this. You are truly talented!
Crayyons Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
MariLiisVahi Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
wow, i'm like a big poetry fan, and i haven't seen such a thing for a long time.
Rinsakikanamekohai Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
amazing lyrics! im still an armature at poetry
scomet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Very Touching and of lively but hurt spirit
rhema-meelee Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012
makes my heart ache :( so good! love it
mixdouble Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer

Great lyrics...
and great track...!

In my mind...
in slowmotion...
I see Shelob approaching...
I cannot run...!
I am already smitten...
by the beat of the song...

Greetings Jakob.
Daisey080 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012
Mesmerizing imagery.
Hfeather53 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Mmm... love... the stuff of wars and legends. <3
jessica35 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
so pretty. Beautiful imagery.
Emry07 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I loved so much the last verse :/
Zilenna Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely beautiful... I'll be following you now.
GwenneAreble Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem (song)
niteshsh Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
i can visualise... amazing
Homercat17 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent Writer ,Also.
Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
wonderful write
Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
& i love your music to
Spazzmatazzle Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Beautiful :)
Molybdenum-Blues Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! Lovely when read as a poem, and lovely as a song. The lyrics are so poignant...
Suyarts Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent poem! Absence hurts and inspires, the yearning feeds imagination and travels in time and the ultimate destiny of desire and memories stands somewhere between pain, longing and extasy. Congratulations.
LostInAPhotograph Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012
This is beautiful! The figurative language is astounding. The similarities between this and my most recently updated poem are uncanny, too. I would never link to my work except in situations like this, check it out: [link]
marylebone Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
Wow.. this is gorgeous!
SapphireTurquoise Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
!!!!!!!!! very romantic !!!!!!!!!
Jsmigle Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Beautifully written!
Iliath Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
Beautiful and moving
Beth-Anne Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2012
Striking and strong :) I really like this.
PhotoPhagia Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012   Photographer
Nicely done. Good flow and selection of words. Gives it a feeling of ethereal levity to a profound matter.
Licentiah Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lovely :heart:
TalesOfNightWing Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Student General Artist
That is just my kind of music...

Reminds me a little of my favorite band Anberlin

I think I now have a second favorite :D
MarMicheal Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
funny thing is im not really into metal but you have a clean sound, the music doesnt over power the words and i can understand you..
MarMicheal Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
WOW! listening to spider silk on the download! the music brings out so much more!
we need to get you a contract with someone, have you sent these demos to any radio stations or label covers??
midnights-angle Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is beautiful!!!
FoolsGolde Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
amazing imagery! :)
Theos-Kengen Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree with ~Ad4e Thanks for sharing :D
elli0777 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I listened to it and I really like the way you put the words into the music :) I find that so hard xx
so amazing!! <3
Ad4e Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012   Traditional Artist
I read the lyrics 1st, then I just had to hear the music.
Even though it's not my kind of music...
It was extremely well done. You have a new exciting style of music that is truly your own and it deserves its place in the music world. You all have worked hard on this and it shows.

The lyrics are powerful & full of passion. I could easily hear them embedded in slow southern jazz... with a piano. :)
SgtRaven Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's... I feel like I'm experiencing the lyrics..
Flower-of-Art Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is beautiful, i relate to it, you are very talented. Brava!
Michawolf13 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
nevelucas Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012
amazingly beautiful!!
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